Just anouther boat in a lonely ocean just sailing away I hope I see that sandy shore today just cuz the swells are rollin doesn't mean I'm just gonna sail the otherway I'm gonna be my own captain I'm gonna go my own way I'm gonna see the distant shore I'm gonna pray I see the light of anouther day just a ship in the sea not a thought of destination just a cheap immatation of what it means to say I'm gonna be my own captain I'm gonna go my own way I'm gonna see the distant shore and pray that I see the light of anouther day excuse my questions imma just floatin by do you want an adventure or just sit and cry and watch as the world wanders by : poem I wrote called my ocean sorry for the long posts I would greatly appreciate feedback on them thanks!
@the writer in the mi, That was really good. Keep them coming man, it's guys like you that make this community great.
@SaidTheKoala, ya I suck at grammar so please forgive the mistakes but thanks for the feed back
@TheAlGoreSortOfHipie, thanks for the feed back the poem was written for my 2nd cousin who drowned in a oyster boat accident we just found out about that on Thursday so it Keene a lot to me
@the writer in the mi, is it weird that I rapped this in my head?
@the writer in the mi, that was really nice man, keep doing these
@the writer in the mi, Great job man! I accidentally down voted you and I am sorry.
@GreenDayGirl, Naw it was actually supposed to be a song but I cant sing
@GreenDayGirl, I rapped it too!
@the writer in the mi, i read it in Marshall Lee's voice T-T
@the writer in the mi, dem virtual feels
@the writer in the mi, great poem man. just next time don't apologize 'for the long post' mmmkay?
@the writer in the mi, I might write a keyboard accompaniment.
This is true he would not return the books... Smart thinking.
@Creamy ginger, why can't he return the books first?
One of my teammates committed suicide and it was a tragedy for not only the family but the whole team school and community its never something to joke about - forever 13 willstrong
@The Goat Herder, I'm really sorry for your lost but don't take the picture that seriously comedy doesn't have boundaries :/
@The Goat Herder, i know I'll sound like a dick but anyone who commits suicide is a coward. Plain and simple they are a coward because they can't deal with their problems when (assuming they don't live in a third world country) billions have it worse than them
@Dub J Mexican, if you're gonna comment on the stupidity of suicide, check your own intelegence and don't be a jackass commenting on someone's post about their sadness over a suicide. Instead of an opinion, you come off as a sick internet troll
@Dub J Mexican, he had underlying depression its a medical condition which affects the dopamine (happiness) released so try dealing with medically being sad all the time please don't comment with ignorance
@Dub J Mexican, Suicide isnt cowardly.Treating someone so badly they want to end their life is cowardly. ~Ashley Purdy
How would his tiny glasses in the second frame fit his giant head.
His tongue looks like a duck in the last frame
What an old joke...
Just get a birthday card too.
I don't find this funny because suicide is not a laughing matter. Also I've lost 6 friends yesterday in a fatal crash
A girl, 15 years old in my school system committed suicide on 9/8/12 due to being very clinically depressed. People, you can make jokes basically about anything but suicide, suicide is not a joke.
What a morbid post.
Those must be some stretchy glasses!
That's just depressing.
I have never seen this joke worded worse
if i looked like that, i would commit suicide, too
Reminds me of that Married With Children episode where Al goes to his old library to turn in The Little Train that Could.
Then why would he have the books if he knows people aren't gonna return them?
S-so d-depressing...... ;-;
They look like whales?!?!
If he can't figure out how to die then it's no wonder he's killing himself.
Who honestly downloaded this picture 4 times?
You can look that up if you don't believe me
And there goes my happiness...