6th grader writes sentences all about bacon
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@Zbuarabia, not college places
@Medal Delivery Boy, I forgot the "but" in my comment, everyone down vote me.
@Medal Delivery Boy,
@Zbuarabia, but not when he is 900 lbs
@Zbuarabia, most likely diabetic places.
@Medal Delivery Boy, lol....not college places....
@Medal Delivery Boy, lol....butt.......
@Zbuarabia, Yea going to be obese
@Zbuarabia, the hospital (DIABEETUS)
@Zbuarabia, not college, but places.
@Zbuarabia, greasy places, but places
(4th section) fragment consider revising
@Reamus Lupin, yeah, the lack of a verb kind of ruins the whole "sentence" thing
But how is this 6th grade?
@AllieLyn, "They're from West Virginia I reckon," he said in a hillbilly voice.
Am I really the only person that doesn't really care for bacon?
@Cozmonic032, ok so the door's this way...
@Cozmonic032, wat
@Ikaris, door? No no no. We drop kick him into a volcano.
@GrimIock, woah, calm down
@Cozmonic032, I think it's good when it's not too crispy, but there are much better foods, such as spaghetti, tears of the innocent, hamburgers, and pizza.
@Billy Talent, what was that 2nd one again?
@Cozmonic032, I only like it on sandwiches, not by itself though.
@Billy Talent, what was that third one again?
@Cozmonic032, gtfo... Just gtfo
As I read this, Jim Gaffigans bit on bacon came on my Pandora comedy station... Weird.
The adjectives "sentences" don't even have verbs which means they aren't "sentences." This is why the world is going to shjt.
Why is this in the sexy category?
@Frosty Nipples, because bacon
@Frosty Nipples, Why are you in the Sexy Category? Like all that kinky sjit do ya?
@TheAmishKid, *shjt. How did I screw that up?
Did I mention bacon?
@Glaceon11310, don't forget bacon.
@Glaceon11310, no
I've learned my lesson. Thank you for showing me the error of my ways on the last update guys.
Shot sentences?
I really, really, don't like bacon...
But the adjective first section doesn't even have complete sentences! They're all clauses!
If read aloud, it's incredibly poetic
Isn't 'c' for compound sentences wrong? There should only be one 'so'.
this is looks like 3rd graders should be doing this kind of work
2 May 2014 #2May2014
They spelt short wrong.
@Harshmellows, he's from Boston. Lol
Why is bacon so popular? I mean it tastes good but its nothing to worship like most internet people do. Questions of the Interwebs I suppose
Which one there's no name on the paper
America. This is true patriotism!
This kid is going places